Friday, 13 April 2012

stage 2 Nina

I need to make a more relevant background, maybe the new reception would be better then a dental surgery.

There are a couple of Fotolia pictures in this video, I think it's quite obvious that they are stock photos which I think makes it look a bit cheesey and if I were a patient I'd wonder what you were hiding, let me know what you think.

I have edited the sound yet as Joy doesn't have Adobe Auditions on her computer. Do you think I need to cut the pauses out form inbetween the sentences?  I like the space personally.

I'm going to put some of the drawn diagrams in that I've done for the PILs, hopefully it's not too graphical.

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